Wednesday 2 March 2016

SPM Narrative Essay - Write a story beginning with: Kim was nervous when the door opened


SPM 2007 question.

Write a story beginning with: Kim was nervous when the door opened


Note: The story line may not be encouraged to be used in the classroom. It simply serves as an entertainment to myself in creative writing.

Kim was nervous when the door opened. His heart was pounding like a drum. His pupils turned smaller as the door creaked larger and larger. A tall slender shadowy figure was seen. He grabbed the nearest object and the man at the door said, “Kim, can I enter?”

It turned out to be his housemate, Jason. Kim was sick after a long day making pizzas at Pizza Hut. Jason showed that he brought medicine. Kim then quickly washed his paranoia away and let Jason in.
Jason was astonished to see how pale and sweaty Kim was so he asked, “Are you sick or did you saw a ghost?”

Kim replied weakly, “It’s not like that. I just had this eerie dream where I was almost murdered by a man in a white mask. He showed neither eyes nor mouth. He chased and chased me with his long legs. He was trying to murder me with his axe. It just felt so real, man. I got so carried away by it. Before you knocked that door, in my dream there was also an old lady with red fiery eyes. She kept whispering over and over about trusting nobody and run. It was weird. Creepy. I think it was just my migraine and fever. I should stop overthinking. Can I have those pills now?”

Jason simply nodded his head while listening. He continued by giving Kim the medicine followed by a glass of water. Kim had it all in instance with the hope of getting better soon. 

However, the medicine did not make Kim feel any better. Nausea began to kick in. He also felt a sudden urge to puke. It felt as if a ball of steel as the size of his hand was coming out of him. Blood was starting to be seen in his nose.

He shouted for help as the pain began to feel excruciating. Kim simply wanted the pain to halt immediately. Yet Jason, with a grin on his face, stood at the corner watching Kim suffocating in his own blood. Kim vomited blood as he shrieked louder and louder.


After some minutes, Kim died in a horrific scene. Jason watched till his very last breath. He reached out his phone in pocket dialing a number with the name Boss and said, “Mission accomplished, sir.”

-MR

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