Thursday 28 July 2016

SPM Directed Writing Example - Informal Letter





P.O. Box 445,
Kampung Amboi 2,
Tenom, Sabah.
21 July 2016
Dear Razif,

I was disappointed to hear from Mum that you got into trouble with your discipline teacher. I was surprised to hear it, as I know that you do like your school and have done well in your exams so far. Mum said that you have to take extra classes now as a punishment. It seems not bad and I hope you take it in good spirit.

               Please do not skip classes again. It is a big mistake. Mum and Dad trust you to attend classes and do well while they work hard to earn money. You will let them down badly if you do not do what is expected of you. As it is, Mum was quite upset.

              When you miss classes, you will find it hard to follow your lessons. This will become a bigger problem when you cannot finish your homework or projects and lose marks in the school assessment. Eventually, you will feel overwhelmed at the work you have to put in to catch up. 

              I don’t have to tell you that you are starting a bad habit by cutting classes. You’re the one who is earning the bad implications out of this. Even the teachers will have a poor impression of you.

              You have been given a one in a million chance to study in an excellent school. So take this golden opportunity well. Second chances are rare and hard to come by. 

              Do you realize that your careless actions may be reflected in your testimonial? You will need a good testimonial to enter a good university, which will also allow you to get a job in the future. Don’t spoil your chance by acting foolishly. There is plenty of time for you to enjoy without cutting classes.

              I am sure you will act responsibly and be more conscientious and hard-working. This is your future we are talking about, so please don’t play truant again. No use looking back in regret one day. 

             Do well, Razif, and I wish you all the best.
Sincerely,
Michele
-MR

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